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I
will
begin.
The first thing--
see the oils,
observe the ash tray.
Where else besides this world do the
oils gleam in vitro,
mark the cement
with celestial mouths, toothless
delighted old sneers--
of diluted smears.
Who in this costly world have we
to blame for dull eyes,
colors in a smoke-bronze ashtray,
only ever gray?
Ashes never pray.
And second--
pray hear the cattails
Define their whisper, their deep husk.
in another world they weep; the
crushed spindle crushes woven dusk.
Observe the weave, its fray
Our Earth is fabric.
Pray pay attention.
It is
all.
will
begin.
The first thing--
see the oils,
observe the ash tray.
Where else besides this world do the
oils gleam in vitro,
mark the cement
with celestial mouths, toothless
delighted old sneers--
of diluted smears.
Who in this costly world have we
to blame for dull eyes,
colors in a smoke-bronze ashtray,
only ever gray?
Ashes never pray.
And second--
pray hear the cattails
Define their whisper, their deep husk.
in another world they weep; the
crushed spindle crushes woven dusk.
Observe the weave, its fray
Our Earth is fabric.
Pray pay attention.
It is
all.
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I am SO HAPPY with how this turned out. My English teacher, Mr. Holzer, showed us a song by Tool today, where the lyrics were written by the Fibonacci Sequence...which is a sequence of numbers that goes like this:
1+1=2
2+1=3
3+2=5
5+3=8
see the pattern? The syllables are measured like that. Try and figure it out in my poem!
It was also the first day, and I was pretty surprised that he assigned us something so hardcore, but I wanted to impress him. Plus I hate writing stinky poetry.
This talks about the wonders of our world and how little it takes to impress human beings.
1+1=2
2+1=3
3+2=5
5+3=8
see the pattern? The syllables are measured like that. Try and figure it out in my poem!
It was also the first day, and I was pretty surprised that he assigned us something so hardcore, but I wanted to impress him. Plus I hate writing stinky poetry.
This talks about the wonders of our world and how little it takes to impress human beings.
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clever, very well done
and here's a for its cleverness
and here's a for its cleverness