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today i'ma full o' jitters
my mouth clatters
my tongue glitters
my head is a dried pea
my teeth are full o' coffee grounds
no rainwater could soothe me
or tooth me, these old sounds
wire through my new bones
and o'er the earth, ocean foams
o'er a gray field pound red roans
thisiz how my head feels
all cluttered up with old stones.
today i'm a spark-rocket
in the dark depth of a bird's eye socket
and i fought hard for this ore locket
but you know what i've got?
the moon in my pocket
my mouth clatters
my tongue glitters
my head is a dried pea
my teeth are full o' coffee grounds
no rainwater could soothe me
or tooth me, these old sounds
wire through my new bones
and o'er the earth, ocean foams
o'er a gray field pound red roans
thisiz how my head feels
all cluttered up with old stones.
today i'm a spark-rocket
in the dark depth of a bird's eye socket
and i fought hard for this ore locket
but you know what i've got?
the moon in my pocket
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Wow, the flow and imagery of this piece is amazing. I love the details and the things you compared your feelings to. "No rainwater could soothe me," really stands out for me.
Wonderful work! I love your writing.
Wonderful work! I love your writing.